Cain and Abel

[PS113C "ABEL"]

Hello everyone. I recently joined the site with a character who uses a biblical name, Abel. I was inspired by Adia and began thinking it would be great if his nemesis of sorts, was named Cain.

Nickname: Cain
Gender: Male
Serial#: Pick one you want, but he would have to be somewhere after 113 (Abel's serial*)
Age: He would have to be very young, according to the story. Less than one actual year. Abel was alive for 3 years before he escaped, and he just escaped recently.

Master: Eleanor Dorinda Gray (Abel's former master)

Original Purpose: Eleanor had already grown tired of Abel before he escaped and was looking to replace him with a new toy and also expand her business. Her plans changed when Abel escaped. It hurt her pride (and her profits) to see her property escape from her. So, for her next New Child she requested additional features on top of her usual order. She requested that he be designed for hunting, tracking, and capturing run away New Children.

True Purpose: The truth is, Cain was designed to 'capture' Abel. Instead, he secretly just wants to kill Abel, because that would be a lot easier on him.

Extra Info: After spending some time gathering info, he heard from a reliable source that PS113C had taken up the nickname 'Abel' after escaping, it was an unusual name to him, and so he asked around about it. He heard the story of Cain and Abel, and how Cain murdered Abel, and so he choose his own nickname 'Cain'.

If you're interested, please take Cain up. Everything else not written here, would be up to you if you decide to take this character on. You can have it anyway you want as long as it doesn't conflict or contradict with what's already here. Of course, some things will be negotiable. Its all in good fun, after all.

I think it would be interesting to play a little cat and mouse every now and then, but be careful when cornered even a mouse will fight back.

[TEARS]

Sounds, like an interesting character and concept. I'd be interested in playing him unless someone else really wants the role~

[PS113C "ABEL"]

I'd be happy to have you play him. Is there anything else about what I've written, that you wanted to change? I'm open to suggestion. If not, feel free to make him.

[TEARS]

Alright, it all looks good to me, I think. How about I start working on an app, trying to follow what you have written, when I get home tonight, and then you can read through it afterwards and let me know if there's anything you want me to change?

[PS113C "ABEL"]

Sounds like a plan. It's kinda weird though, since your the admin and I have to look over your bio... when on Tuesday it was the other way around.

[TEARS]

lol, well, since it's for your subplot idea I want to make sure the character suits what you have in mind~

[TEARS]

Got a profile up here. Let me know if it works or if you want me to change anything.

[PS113C "ABEL"]

It mostly looks good to me... Particularly I like the parts about 'hoping for a better life' and the fact that he blames Abel for his current suffering. It makes the character seem more 'human' rather than a villain. Instead of being pure evil, he is just bit misguided. That's exactly what I like in an antagonist type character.

The only thing I am questioning is the serial number.

Abel was #113, but he was alive for 3 years in total and escaped maybe a few months before his third birthday... if Cain is #120 then that means only 6 New Children were made in those 2 and 1/2 years or so.

I'm not as familiar with this site as you are obviously, so in your opinion do you think that is feasible? Perhaps my Abel should actually be changed to a lower number... or maybe made younger in actual age wise... to explain his high number. What do you think?

That's about it for my notes on the character.

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About their plot and roles together, I think its kinda already understood. Cain will try to kill or capture Abel, and Abel will try to convince Cain that he does not need to follow his master.

But neither should be successful, at least right away. After some plotting in the future, maybe an interesting resolution can be reached of some kind.

[TEARS]

Well, there aren't that many New Children made per year due to the high cost of an order, so it's probably feasible, but maybe I will actually bump his number up a few digits. Other than that, I'm glad he works~

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And right~ We can have them just play cat and mouse a bit and see what kind of interesting conclusions we can come up with later.